ANTHONY GOODMAN
Life-Choice Memoir Reflection10/16/2017 1.Who did you work with to compose your life-choice memoir? Was this a good approach?
2.What rhetorical mode and genre are you using? 3. When did you write this project? Good approach? 4. Where did you write this project? Good approach? 5. Why did you choose to write about your chosen topic? Good choice? 6. How did it feel to write this narrative ("during, after, and since")? Do you have any "if only" moments that can help you revise the draft? 7. How will you revise your narrative? 1. I worked with our ALP class to compose this paper, It was a good approach with some great words and revisions from everyone in the class to show me how to make this writing better than it is. 2. The genre I am using for this paper is the life choice memoir 3. I started this essay in our ALP class about a week before we started the assignment because we wrote a scene before then, and the scene I chose was a life choice I could continue to write with, I continued to work on this essay about every other day or two since it was assigned and added about a thousand words since the original scene creation. The approach I made with this essay was fair I think I could have started in a better way but for the most part I think that I took this on well. 4.I wrote this project in the classroom for only probably a couple of hours of our class time and spent probably the same amount to a little more time at my home in my living room. 5.I chose to write about this topic because it is a topic that has changed my life heavily and a very interesting topic to me in which I can write about and not bore or force myself to write it, it actually is fun to write about this topic to me. 6.Yes there are many parts or moments I can think back to that need to be revised, I most likely would not be able to revise this as well if it were not for our ALP class being able to get together and revise our papers together. 7. I will revise my narrative through information that was given in our ALP class about what we need to change in it, like adding in more informational pieces of the paper so the reader is not lost while reading the paper, or to not add as much description in subjects that do not matter to the actual story, or completely cutting out those scenes that do not really support the story as much as I though they did.
2 Comments
Jacqueline
10/16/2017 08:02:56 pm
I really agree the ALP class helps big time for the revisions of the paper.
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Damian Puglia
10/19/2017 11:27:19 am
I also got a lot of stuff done in ALP and thought it helped
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